Part+11+Change+Happens

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This is a report on an unhealthy choice that people could make. This will need to be written as a report following the format that you will be taught. It can contain parts of a persuasive text but needs to mainly focus on a report format. You can make a choice from any behaviour that may be unhealthy (smoking, overeating, no exercise or anything else you can think of)===== This report will need to be based on facts that make the behaviour unhealthy. The idea is not to convince other people not to undertake the behaviour but inform them of the dangers of their choice. Before you begin this part you will need to email Mr Ellis to tell him what unhealthy choice you have chosen. The facts can not just be made up but will need to be researched. I would suggest graphs or data would really help with this part. There is a lot of government organisations from which you would be able to get information and a quick check of their website or an email might help with this.

You need to include a bibliography as part of this page

Part 11 - Scoring
This part will be marked on a rubric designed by Mr Ellis. It will be self assessed and also assessed by Mr Ellis. The rubric is included below


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 * Is this a report? || None of the characteristics of a report || Some of the characteristics of a report || Most of the characteristics of a report || All the characteristics of a report ||
 * Does it try and inform you about your choices ? || It doesn't try and inform || It gives some information but not really showing you negatives || It gives a lot of suitable information using only words || It informs using facts, statistics and well written ideas ||
 * Is it ready to go in a magazine? || No, lots of mistakes and untidy || Yes but needs tidying up and checking spelling and grammar || Yes, looking good and some errors || Yes, looking good and no errors ||
 * Do your facts make sense and are well researched? || No bibliography and doesn't make sense || Bibliography is limited and doesn't make much sense || Bibliography done but with limited sources and makes sense || Good bibliography and research has come from many sources and makes sense ||